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• Thorny’s revenge finale

  Thorny stumbled across the forest until he saw a strange shiny cliff. “That would be the Starcliff.” Thorny heard a strange voice mew. “Beautiful, isn’t it.” The fluffy black she-cat slipped out of the bushes. “N-N-Nightstar!” He yowled. “Shhhhh. Calm down Thorny, it’s alright. Listen, I’m- I’m sorry about your father. But he did a terrible thing.” “What did he do?” Thorny questioned. “He killed a kind cat from Iceclan,” Nightstar stated,“her name was Moonberry.” “Is that where Moonpaw’s name comes from?” Thorny meowed. “Yes.” Nightstar replied. Thorny purred, he didn’t have an evil aunt. He should have been more worried about his father. Nightstar got up to leave. “Wait,” Thorny mewed “I want to come with you.” Nightstar was shocked, but after a few moments, a warm expression appeared on her face. “Of course Thorny-“ she paused a minute,” Thornypaw.” I hope you liked Thorny’s revenge. My next story will be about 🥁🥁🥁drumroll please! Fateflame! He is an orange tabby tom, who has amber eyes. He has no mate, is the son of Killerfang and Nightstar. And is the sibling of Moondrift and Cliffstone. He is shy and reserved, and is very sensitive. He is bullied by Icyfoot,Littlesnarl,Geckopelt,Kinkpaw, and Mallardpaw, for looking so much like the evil Eagleclaw. It will soon be in a vision of shadows! Byeeeeee! Ravensight/ Dawn of silver rain (dawn)/ Nova the kittypet.

  By Nightfeather the awesome

• Question

  When you submit for a clan do they write the story and just add your cat to it or..? Like or do you get to pick what they do and if so how?

  By MTApollo

• Chapter 27 of Sunsetsplash's Destiny! Part 2!

  " Come on, my loves." Sunsetsplash meowed over her shoulder, climbing over tree stumps. " I wanted to show you something." Sunsetsplash had rounded up her kits — Stormpaw, Leafpaw, and Shadowpaw — and was taking them to the place their father died. They were so big now, almost the same size as her . . . Stormpaw looked as though he'd be larger than Sunsetsplash, when he was fully grown! Certainly larger than his sisters. She led them into the clearing, and Sunsetsplash felt something stir her pelt, as a comforting scent wreathed around hers. Smokecloud. He had come to see his kits. " Wow! This place is so pretty!" Leafpaw exclaimed, patting her paws against the bright green grass. " Look at all the flowers," Shadowpaw pointed out, sniffing a little daisy. " I bet this place would be good for fighting!" Stormpaw meowed, doing one of the battle moves he learned recently — rear up, spin, and slash — and promptly fell on his face. Sunsetsplash purred, but she had winced at his words. She helped him up, earning herself a grumpy sniff from the tabby, and steered the apprentices towards the spot where Smokecloud had fallen. Sunsetsplash was pleased to see the blood had washed away, finally. " Can you guys tell me why this place is important?" She prompted sadly. Leafpaw's eyes widened in shock, Shadowpaw stayed silent, apparently deep in thought, while Stormpaw looked uncomfortable. " It's . . . It's where our father died, isn't it?" Stormpaw meowed quietly. Leafpaw and Shadowpaw both looked at him in shock, and their eyes fell on Sunsetsplash, as though hoping she'd say he was wrong. " You are right, Stormpaw. This is where Smokecloud was murdered, right in front of me. He saved me, you know — and you three, because I had been with you for not a moon before he died." Sunsetsplash sighed. " We always imagined the life we would have, once you were born, but it was never meant to be. . . He's in StarClan, now. Watching over us." The three young cats looked subdued. Finally, Leafpaw mewed, " What happened?" Sunsetsplash told them the story of his death, leaving out Dark Shadow. She didn't want them to hold a grudge against the tom, even though. . . Even if he wanted to kill Sunsetsplash. " Who killed him?" Shadowpaw asked. Sunsetsplash frowned at her keen, precocious daughter. She hesitated, debating whether to tell them or not. • Tell them. They deserve to know, • Smokecloud whispered into her ear. Sunsetsplash sighed. • Fine, I will, • she thought back, hoping he would hear. " The cat who killed him was Dark Shadow —" " The ShadowClan cat!" They all said in unison. " The one who got exiled!" Stormpaw added, his eyes wide. Sunsetsplash nodded. " Yes, that's him. That's Dark Shadow, and he . . . he's the shadow on every cat's sun." Closer to the end, now! The next chapters will be in the novella sets! If you go to the Hollyleaf book, and go to the first novella set in that series, that's where the chapter will be. - Sunsetsplash

  By 👾👾👾1532

• Submitting for raindropclan!

  Hi! I’m submitting Brookstripe as deputy for raindropclan. Brookestripe: dark grey tom, strong, great swimmer. Brookstripe is originally from my clan, GorgeClan, and he is a senior warrior. Thanks! Cloverpeak and Eagleclaw ❤️❤️

  By neri84123

• RaindropClan! [OPEN]

  RaindropClan lives in a small forest and a deep river. They get their main supplies and food from the forest. However there is some times when some cats will go swim, and catch some fish. They eat, rabbit, voles, water voles, squirrels, etc. ———————————— Leader: Wolfstar, a pale cinnamon she-cat with black paws and ice-colored grey eyes. ———————————— Deputy: Submit one! ———————————— Medicine cat: Yewthorn, yellow tabby tom with white paws and green eyes. ———————————— Warriors: Hollowsky, a small blueish grey tom with white splotches on his back and on big one on his eye, pale blue eyes. Luckysong, a small black tom with green ear tips and dark green eyes. Brindlewish, a fluffy sliver she-cat with white chest and freckles on her face and pale blue eyes. Darkfleck, black tom with green eyes and one white paw. Ivyheart, russet tabby she-cat with brown tabby splotches and amber eyes. Littlefoot, she, with a light brown pelt and some ivory and white spots on her legs and tail with pale blue eyes. Pantherleap, black tom with cinnamon paws. Foxsong, cinnamon she-cat with black paws, black tail and muzzle. ———————————— Apprentices: Puddlepaw, white she-cat with orange markings on her paws. Rainpaw, a blue-grey tom with long fur and faint grey tabby markings. ———————————— Queens: Grasshopper, a small white she-cat with stubby tail and dark green eyes. Mistystripes, a pale grey she-cat with white legs and grey tabby whorls, mother to Quietkit and Ravenkit. Fernwing, a green she-cat with amber eyes. ———————————— Kits: Queitkit, a tiny white she-cat with small ears, grey speckles and green eyes. Ravenkit, a sleek black tom with blue eyes. ———————————— Elders: Jaguartail, pale tom with cinnamon spots. Leopardfang, black she-cat with unique grey eyes and a golden muzzle. ———————————— Leader:1/1 Deputy:0/1 Medicine cats:1/2 Warriors:8/12 Apprentices:2/4 Queens:3/3 [FULL] Kits:2/8 Elders2/3 ———————————— Thanks! Anyhoo have a great day/night! And yes I’m changing my name bc, why not :)! Also sorry for being inactive for so long 😅! -Cottonflight

  By bxhsjdbsgnsbsy

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