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• Nightfeather’s destiny: part three!

  Nightfeather gazed blankly at the Starcliff. (My version of the Highrock.) The gathering should have started by now. The four leaders inched their way to the front of the Starcliff, but something was wrong. One cat stood maliciously behind each leader, unsheathing their claws, and their teeth glowing in the moonlight. She realized who three of the cats were, Lightningfury, Flowerdawn, and Honeyshine! They were standing next to a muscular, ginger tom, he was a rouge. “Traitors,”Nightheart yowled, “Flowerdawn! How could you do this to your mentor’s mother!?” “DarkStar is my mentor’s mother,” Flowerdawn began, “but you were never my mentor!” Nightfeather was shocked at this remark. “Then who is your mentor, that tom your staring at all lovingly?” Why yes he is, how did you know! Nightfeather was curious, “Just who is this tom?” “I’m surprised that you don’t recognize…..your own brother!” “Eagleclaw!?” “ When I’m done with these four,” he hissed,” It’ll be Eaglestar.” “No!!!” Nightfeather lunged at her terrible brother. “I won’t let you kill our mother!” The rest of the cats at the gathering stood frozen, in both shock and horror. Accidentally, Nightfeather’s unsheathed claw slit open her brother’s neck. “RUN!!!” Screeched Eagleclaw’s followers. A starclan queen appeared in the sky. “I am Moonberry, thank you Nightfeather, when Eagleclaw went missing, that screech you heard in the forest was mine. Eagleclaw killed me, and made me a ghost. And now I’ve been avenged, and can go to starclan.” “But what about Eagleclaw’s spirit?” Nightfeather asked. “Do not worry, on my way to starclan, I will deliver him to the rest of the dark forest cats.” Moonberry comforted. The epilogue will be in the next book. -Ravenpaw/sight 🐦‍⬛

  By Nightfeather the awesome

• Tealgaze’s Path— Chapter three!

  Tealgaze was on border patrol with Shimmerdawn, an air-headed she-cat with white fur, when she doubled over in pain as a sharp throbbing sensation ripped into her stomach. She took deep breaths as she waited for it to pass, while Shimmerdawn fluttered around her in a nervous panic. “ I’m fine — agh!” Tealgaze felt another painful spasm that quickly faded away. When the pain was all gone, she dared to straighten herself. “ I’m fine, Shimmerdawn.” “ We should get you to the medicine’s den, Tealgaze — where are you going?” “ Finishing the patrol!” Tealgaze called over her shoulder as she started to pad away. “ No!” Shimmerdawn meowed firmly. “ You’re going to the medicine’s den.” Tealgaze was lying on her side in the medicine den as Ravenpool examined her. “ Well, Tealgaze — I know you won’t like this news very much, however,” He paused, as Tealgaze sat up. “ You’re expecting kits.” “ WHAT?” Tealgaze burst out, feeling rage harden and burn in her stomach. “ I’m expecting… kits?” Ravenpool looked severely uncomfortable. “ Yes, you are. Why don’t you tell Rippedgorse, he’ll be happy about this, won’t be?” “ Oh, I’ll tell him all right.” Tealgaze hissed angrily. “ Thanks, though, Ravenpool!” She yowled at him, not unkindly, as she left the den and searched for Rippedgorse. She found him at the fresh-kill pile, studying the pile. “ You! I told you no!” Tealgaze yowled, rounding on her mate. Heads turned as Rippedgorse took a step back. “ What—“ “ I said no kits, Rippedgorse!” She repeated. “ So why did Ravenpool just tell me I’m expecting kits?” “ I… I… sorry…” “ You aren’t sorry!” Tealgaze spat. “ I’ve had enough of you.” Tealgaze ran away as Mousepetal called to her, but she ignored her sister and ran to the edge of WolfClan territory. She sat down on a large smooth stone and stewed in silence, fury and betrayal swirling in her stomach like a storm. After a few moments, Mousepetal burst out of a tangle of ivy with Robinbreeze and Pouncebranch behind her. “ Are you okay?” Pouncebranch asked, his eyes worried. “ No. I’m leaving WolfClan.” Tealgaze burst out angrily. “ I can’t stay here — I hate it.” “ But —“ Robinbreeze started, but Mousepetal nudged him. “ She has to do what she has to do.” She said sadly. She turned to Tealgaze. “ But we‘ll miss you, Tealgaze.” “ So much,” Pouncebranch said shakily. Robinbreeze looked at his brother and sister sadly, then his eyes grew dull. “ Okay… if you have to…” Tealgaze got up and purred sadly, nuzzling her siblings and wishing them goodbye. “ I’m sorry. I really am, but…” Tealgaze looked up at the sky, at StarClan, and wondered if they could send some light her way. “ I have to go.” “ But where will you go?” Pouncebranch asked, almost completely composed now. “ Towards the mountains. I’ll find a place where I’m safe, and happy. I’ll miss… I’ll m-miss you guys so m-much—“ and she broke down. Robinbreeze comforted her while she regained control and she took a step back. “ May StarClan go with you, sister!” Pouncebranch cried in hopeful optimism as Tealgaze turned towards the mountains in the distance. “ May StarClan light your path!” Mousepetal yowled, her eyes glistening. “ We wish you well, sister.” Robinbreeze added, with a flick of his tail. “ We’ll take care of mother. May StarClan go with you.” And Tealgaze ran away from her old life and into the unknown, tears streaking her fur as she thought of her littermates… her mother… her father… • Please watch over me, StarClan… • The next chapter shall be in A Forest Divided! Lol I got tired of saying next book ;3 — Sunsetsplash

  By 👾👾👾1532

• @tatertotsy 13

  I got Willowwing. Lol. Ok you know what I’ll give her a life Willowwing Description: gray she-cat with brown tabby stripes and green eyes, one white paw and ear Clan: RiverClan Family Mother: Sandfur-brown tabby she-cat with blue eyes Father: Grassstorm-gray tom with green eyes and a white paw Brothers: Rabbitleaf-dark brown tom with blue eyes; Rabbittail-brown tabby tom with green eyes Sister: Twilightwing-brown she-cat with gray spots and blue eyes Personality: kind, patient, gets irritable easily, hates being teased just b/c she used to be a drypaw Crush: Oakburr ❤️-muscular dark brown tabby tom with yellow eyes That’s all!! Bai! Sincerely, Silverflame of SunClan For the record, all of Willowwing’s fam is based off my real fam.

  By Dove's Wing

• BloodClan fanfic for no reason at all•Join alternate universe BloodClan!

  Tsym Hazelpaw! :D will update soon I’m busy rn :D LEOPARDSPLASH: *oops* yeah of course! Np! I love creating kits so much ima do it rn Slash, black-and-white tom-kit with teal eyes Hiss, reddish she-kit with red eyes Bite, black-and-white tom-kit with red eyes Pounce, reddish she-kit with teal eyes This is exactly what I got in the kit generator lol funnily enough they’re like the generic kit combos Ivy out baiii ThunderClan is now closed, the message board is the first arc, RiverClan the New Prophecy arc, ShadowClan the Power of Three, and WindClan A Vision Of Shadows. SkyClan is the Omen of the Stars and BloodClan is in Dawn of the Clans. The information to submit is in the Broken Code arc. Thanks Espresso Cat! *inhales* *****IF YOU HAVEN’T SUBMITTED CATS BEFORE, PLEASE CHECK THE REVIEWS OF ANY BROKEN CODE BOOK BEFORE SUBMITTING!***** *exhales* sorry for all caps just had to make it clear 😂 😜 BloodClan: Leader: Killer, black tom with white splotches and red eyes. Submitted by Leopardsplash. Trainee, Blood, black tom with red claws and eyes. Submitted by Leopardsplash. Deputy: Sharp, reddish-furred she-cat with extremely long claws and teal eyes. Mother to Slash, Pounce, Bite, and Hiss. Submitted by Leopardsplash. BloodClan cats: Snarl, black tom with piercing blue eyes. Submitted by MagnoliaHeart. Death, brown tortoiseshell tom with brown eyes. Submitted by MagnoliaHeart. Croak, white tom with splattered black splotches. Submitted by MagnoliaHeart. Frog, tortoiseshell she-cat. Submitted by MagnoliaHeart. Trainee, Claw, black tom with teal eyes. Submitted by Leopardsplash. Fang, heavily scarred creamy white tom with a fluffy tail. Submitted by xXGalacticSkiesXx. Trainee, Honey, pretty golden she-cat with green eyes. Submitted by Leopardsplash. Prisoners: Brook, gray tabby she-cat with amber streaks. Blue eyes. Formerly of RiverClan, now is mates with Fang. Two kits, Growl and Stream. Submitted by xXGalacticSkiesXx. Growl, creamy white tom-kit with amber splotches. Parents submitted by GalacticSkies but cat made by Ivywhisker. Stream, gray tabby she-cat with creamy white streaks. Parents were submitted by GalacticSkies but cat was made by Ivywhisker. (Yep I gave Brook her kits because my fanfic couldn’t wait lol. Also to add stuff to debate in the prisoner controversy: would Brook’s kits be prisoners even if they were born in BloodClan? I just put them in prisoners since there are more BloodClan cats than prisoners but idk) Trainees: none BLOODCLAN: 9/18 cats (including kits and queens) 3/10 prisoners (including kits and queens, although I’m not sure why BloodClan would want to capture kits and queens) 3/5 trainees (sure let’s call them that instead of apprentices) I haven’t updated this in FOREVER so I’m going to put the next chapter in the next book… and now I have to go write the next chapter 😼😂 BloodClan fanfic for no reason at all Prologue: Brook looked down at her kits. One was gray tabby she-cat with creamy white stripes, and one was a white tom with amber splotches. They were the perfect combination of her and Fang. “You name the she-cat, I’ll name the tom,” Fang, her mate, said. Brook thought. She missed the stream and lake every day. She was happy that she was here now, and even swam in a nearby lake sometimes. Still… “I’ll name this one… Stream.” “This one is Growl. Are you okay with that?” “Of course. You picked it.” Brook purred and rubbed her muzzle along her mate’s creamy white fur. Her amber stripes caught the light and shimmered against her gray pelt. A few of the cats in BloodClan had been bred with specific cats to create “cool-looking” cats, but not her. Her amber stripes were completely natural. One of the cats who had been specifically bred was the leader, Killer. He had had an albino mother and a pure black father, and the result was a black-and-white tom with eerie red eyes. One of his kits had inherited that feature, but instead of being sad or angry at the Twolegs, he’d laughed and named his kit Blood, for his blood-red eyes. Her kits squirmed to her belly and she sighed in relief and pleasure. The birth had gone as smoothly as possible, unlike Sharp’s. Her kits, Claw, Blood, and Honey, had taken almost an hour to come. Fang nudged her, snapping her out of it. “It’s forage-time. I have to go.” Of course. She had forgotten. It was early in the morning, and the BloodClan cats always foraged just before dawn. They had to get ahead of their competition and get the leftover scraps of Twoleg food before the other rogues and loners got them. Due to this system, food was actually more guaranteed on a daily basis than in the Clans… for the most part. The Clans, especially RiverClan, in greenleaf always caught more than the BloodClan cats scrounged up. But in leafbare, food was more likely to be in the bellies of BloodClan cats than Clan cats. Fang nuzzled her and their kits and padded out of the room. For a fierce, bloodthirsty cat, her mate could be very loving when he wanted to be. Stream and Growl cuddled up to her, fuzzy little balls of warmth. Brook purred. She was right where she needed to be. ~Ivywhisker

  By warriorsIScool

• Wait wat??

  I am very confused, how did GalacticSkies create Sharp, when I created her??? I am so confused…. Also thx for the kits! ——————————————————— Don’t be mad at me people, plz don’t. 1. Bristle Frost (R.I.P. 😭) 2. Star Flower (she’s awesome! And manipulative………….) 3. Needle Tail 4. Hawk Frost (if only he turned good…….) 5. Maple Shade (her story is so sad, cry ) So yeah. Ummm plz don’t hate me. WAIT!!! 1 1/2. Spotted Leaf (how could I forget her? 🤦🏼‍♀️) Anyway see ya! Also join the Tree Cats! (See Into the Wild for more info) Also Ivy, could you create 4 kits for Killer and Sharp??? (Their current kits should be about app age right now) Thanks! -LeopardSplash of AU Thunder Clan

  By Rosy Spotted Kitten

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